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Wil Dalton's avatar

This is great!

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Wil Dalton's avatar

I liked how focused on the moment this story is, really brings the reader into this one particular amazing time at camp, and then at the end it explodes into forever. Really well done!

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Blake Greene's avatar

Thank you so much! That's exactly what I was going for. I'd never thought of it like that - exploding into forever - that's great

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Blake Greene's avatar

Thank you, Will! It's cool to put a face to a non-pen name of a writer whose story I really enjoyed (that's a sentence right there) :D

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Wil Dalton's avatar

Ha! There's a funny story about that story; I hope to share someday soon.

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